free verse here to stay,
twinkle stars to imagine the day,
no one shall restrict you with a lock,
Our freedom of expression means a lot.
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Eat your mooncake on Jupiter,
Party on Sunday with a green Monster,
with Wisdom, pain reduces,
with comprehension, correction deduces.
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why do you think that I shall quit?
you do feel hurt when I choose to hate
with respect, life is enjoyable
with peace, free verse is invent-able.
lovely word play.
ReplyDeletefabulous rhyming.
ReplyDeletethis is cool.
ReplyDeletelove the free flow though.
ReplyDeletesail on,
ReplyDeleteyou will see the dawn.
:)
careful and fun.
ReplyDeletea free verse is a sentence that stands for a point of view.
ReplyDeletefun word play.
beautiful.
ReplyDeleteeat mooncake on jupiter, that's fun to me.
ReplyDeletehave a great day.
ReplyDeletelovely.
ReplyDeleteSlick
ReplyDeletesmart.
ReplyDeleteway to go.
ReplyDeleteperfect!
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