Tuesday, February 10, 2015

A Free Verse Poem

free verse here to stay,
twinkle stars to imagine the day,
no one shall restrict you with a lock,
Our freedom of expression means a lot.
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Eat your mooncake on Jupiter,
Party on Sunday with a green Monster,
with Wisdom, pain reduces,
with comprehension, correction deduces.
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why do you think that I shall quit?
you do feel hurt when I choose to hate
with respect, life is enjoyable
with peace, free verse is invent-able.
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15 comments:

  1. Malia Craig Tagg Lawrence PageFebruary 10, 2015 at 7:05 PM

    lovely word play.

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 11, 2015 at 8:37 AM

    fabulous rhyming.

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  3. Kora-Leah Meet Faust WilsonFebruary 11, 2015 at 8:38 AM

    this is cool.

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  4. AnonymousFebruary 11, 2015 at 10:56 AM

    love the free flow though.

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  5. Mary Bruce Leopold Holm ReedFebruary 11, 2015 at 10:56 AM

    sail on,
    you will see the dawn.

    :)

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  6. AnonymousFebruary 12, 2015 at 11:22 AM

    careful and fun.

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  7. AnonymousFebruary 12, 2015 at 12:09 PM

    a free verse is a sentence that stands for a point of view.
    fun word play.

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  8. AnonymousFebruary 12, 2015 at 8:32 PM

    beautiful.

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  9. AnonymousFebruary 13, 2015 at 9:41 AM

    eat mooncake on jupiter, that's fun to me.

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  10. Sasha Jenna Gust McCormick RobertsonFebruary 13, 2015 at 10:45 AM

    have a great day.

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  11. Christopher Kerry Scott Sophie Johnson February 14, 2015 at 6:15 PM

    lovely.

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  12. A.B. ThomasFebruary 15, 2015 at 8:21 AM

    Slick

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  13. AnonymousFebruary 15, 2015 at 5:58 PM

    smart.

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  14. AnonymousFebruary 17, 2015 at 7:20 AM

    way to go.

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  15. Maggie Patti Barbara Frankford-WaltonFebruary 20, 2015 at 6:12 PM

    perfect!

    http://promisingpoetsparkinglot.blogspot.com/2015/02/hyde-park-thursday-poets-rally-week-80.html

    amazing one! an award for you.

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